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A Curious Redline by Altalamatox A Curious Redline by Altalamatox
A while ago ~Arhasen asked me if I wouldn't critique one of her paintings. I did a bit of redline for her because a picture's worth a thousand or about a trillion if you're me.

She did a very awesome thing just now and suggested I post this to dA for others to check out, which is really rather brave in my book! So a little feature for her lovely photography here, if you have a moment to spare for some lovely photography. :)

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CyaneRainBlack Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That is very helpful to look at and think of. I am mostly self taught so seeing something like this is a bit of a light bulb turning on.
kiotana Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Professional General Artist
I love that you did this. I'd like to see more critics; it helps me become better too.
GrumpyHyena Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Student General Artist
this is actually really helpful for anyone really ^.^ not just the person asking for help
Arhasen Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist


Just when you're about to write a fiction novel about something, it goes and becomes reality.

Technology these days leaves NOTHING to the imagination... lol

Not that this information will get me down completely from pursuing this story, but it kind of stole my thunder. XP
Altalamatox Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012

Ah, but for the record, your fish is MUCH cooler. Is your little guy a cyborg fish or is he all machine?
Arhasen Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
He's a cyborg fish - his kind are a small wave of genetic experiments that a progressive group of scientists have displayed to the public eye. I should mention however, that these creatures are far from the latest in their scientific ventures...The true aim of this group is being researched in secret, and is far more questionable than creating cyborgs out of hybrid sea creatures. (insert evil laugh)

Now I need to actually start *writing* the story... XD
Araneal Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Thank you both very much for sharing this one! You have no idea how helpful it was with all these detailtips and to be able too see what they led to! Like the fishfin! :) (And to see how someone who can look at drawings! ^^ )
enerai Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I learned so much things from that tips! I didn't took care for so many details!
Thank you very much for sharing this with us! :heart:
Glowcrow Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
A great critique, which I find helpful even though my work is not in question. You pin point some simple yet effective ways concerning the way anatomy, lights and colours can be easily edited.
Illusioninme Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
wow, her photography is amazing, I love the clouds. Her artwork is interesting, I never would have thought of a cyborg like fish. They'd make interesting characters
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