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A while ago ~Arhasen asked me if I wouldn't critique one of her paintings. I did a bit of redline for her because a picture's worth a thousand or about a trillion if you're me.

She did a very awesome thing just now and suggested I post this to dA for others to check out, which is really rather brave in my book! So a little feature for her lovely photography here, if you have a moment to spare for some lovely photography. :)


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~kiotana Apr 28, 2013  Student General Artist
I love that you did this. I'd like to see more critics; it helps me become better too.
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=WeirdBovid Apr 11, 2013  Student General Artist
this is actually really helpful for anyone really ^.^ not just the person asking for help
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*Arhasen Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
IT CAME TRUE!!~!~

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Just when you're about to write a fiction novel about something, it goes and becomes reality.

Technology these days leaves NOTHING to the imagination... lol

Not that this information will get me down completely from pursuing this story, but it kind of stole my thunder. XP
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:iconaltalamatox:
Haha!

Ah, but for the record, your fish is MUCH cooler. Is your little guy a cyborg fish or is he all machine?
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:iconarhasen:
*Arhasen Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
He's a cyborg fish - his kind are a small wave of genetic experiments that a progressive group of scientists have displayed to the public eye. I should mention however, that these creatures are far from the latest in their scientific ventures...The true aim of this group is being researched in secret, and is far more questionable than creating cyborgs out of hybrid sea creatures. (insert evil laugh)

Now I need to actually start *writing* the story... XD
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:iconaraneal:
Thank you both very much for sharing this one! You have no idea how helpful it was with all these detailtips and to be able too see what they led to! Like the fishfin! :) (And to see how someone who can look at drawings! ^^ )
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~enerai Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I learned so much things from that tips! I didn't took care for so many details!
Thank you very much for sharing this with us! :heart:
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~Glowcrow Sep 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
A great critique, which I find helpful even though my work is not in question. You pin point some simple yet effective ways concerning the way anatomy, lights and colours can be easily edited.
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:iconillusioninme:
wow, her photography is amazing, I love the clouds. Her artwork is interesting, I never would have thought of a cyborg like fish. They'd make interesting characters
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Mood: Wow! *Arhasen Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeek! Really? I'm glad you liked it... (was I supposed to see this comment...? lol)

I'm thinking that I have much better luck with photography than digital art like this picture -capturing subject matter is easier than creating it. XD

:iconaltalamatox: is so awesome for having done this for me! Her tips make SO MUCH SENSE! :D
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